
STRONGER WORLDS. SHARPER CHARACTERS.
Developmental Editing from the Heart!
Finally, a Developmental Editor with mad skills, committed to character and world building that leaves a lasting impact
for your readers, long after the last page.
Who the Heck
is Jess McGun?
Well, I’m a lifelong writer & overthinker, hell bent on creating a down-to-earth developmental editing journey that is supportive and generative!
I believe in editing that brings your world and characters to life.
I take your raw, beautifully messy manuscript, and help you refine it into a powerful story that pulses with your unique voice. Together we sharpen your characters, deepen your world, and structure your narrative so readers can’t look away.
The result? A polished, immersive book that sticks with them long after ‘The End.’ Together we focus on building the manuscript of your dreams.
The truth is, I’m just a Mom who love’s me some Schitt’s Creek, live theatre, writing (duh), ritual drinks, and honest ass people!
So if you’re looking for a developmental editor who specializes in romance, fantasy, romantasy, and paranormal fiction, one who understands the delicate balance of pacing, emotional depth, and immersive world building, let’s do this!
You’re
An Author with a manuscript that has good bones but needs a keen eye & more world and character building.
You understand the value of good developmental editing & want to really build out your world and create real, relatable, fully fleshed out characters!
You’ve finished your first draft, at last, and need that second pair of eyes you trust to bring your manuscript to life.
You want a book you can be proud of with beautifully developed characters that are well rounded and a world that readers will understand and devour.
I’m
A Developmental Editor who gets it. And gets the moments of overwhelm when it just makes sense to ask for help!
I offer constructive feedback that is direct, actionable, and kind because great editing shouldn’t crush your voice, it should elevate it.
I help you refine your story with clarity and care so characters resonate, worlds feel real, and readers remember.
I have a background in theatre which offers a unique perspective in character beats and development, along with world building
I bring badass editorial skills and relentless care to polish your book’s soul.
Together
We are an effing force to be reckoned with! Building a strong story that your readers can’t put down!
We are a team and I will deliver, but we both know you are in the driver's seat.
We’re partners in the messy, magical work of storytelling. Together, we’ll turn your draft into a book that has impact.
We work side by side to uncover your story’s brightest strengths and sharpen them until every chapter AND character pulses with intention.
I love this so far, but let’s talk about cost!

What People Are Saying
To say that Jessica is a master of her craft is a vast understatement. Her unique background and understanding of story development is unmatched. In an age of “there’s an app for this” or “ask AI that,” it’s easy to lose sight of the importance of a strong developmental editor. Jessica’s ability to offer constructive criticism while simultaneously being my greatest cheerleader led me to rework my story and produce something that I am truly proud to offer to my readers. She will forever and always be my editor and I can’t express enough how highly I regard her work! -Dahlia Rund